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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-01-31 07:05 PM



Evil eyes good intentions
which is what you forgot to
mention. Plotting and scheming
is your true profession

Delicate flowers stomped on the
grown, your shoe print upon them
not making a sound. The flutter
of my heart now goes astrange
the guy I thought was kind
is not very clear

Stormy nights the love I just
want one more fight. To be
cuddled and held tell me no more
I don't want to experince hell

They say to heck with it
don't play the game anymore
I can't help it no matter how
hard I fight. I just want someone
to love me and kiss me all night

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-01-31 10:02 PM


Good bit of honesty here in thought.

Like the move and swing but it blocks flow at times but a words that flow are a relief.

Dave

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-02-01 12:37 PM


Let off that steam girlfriend....powerful and passionate...

~ARh

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
3 posted 2005-02-01 05:42 PM


your sentiments are well expressed and heartfelt. wonderful piece here!
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