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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-01-31 09:44 AM


Usually, I would spend part of my day
leafing through pages of blue along the way.
Every thing read, has been beautiful so far
leaving me in tears, wishing on distant star.

Words building into tears all morning
pulling on heart strings without warning,
such compassion I've seen in every verse
but still, inside my screams fall silent unto this curse.

So for the rest of this day, I shall not read
  because my soul already bleeds,
    because my heart already cries
       and I'm too damn tired of asking why.


I know everythings going to be ok, if you just stay gone. (jimmy wayne)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-01-2005 07:29 AM).]

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1 posted 2005-01-31 09:51 AM


ohhh gal.... theres alot of uplifting words too....hugsssssss you

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that walks beside me
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Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-01-31 09:53 AM


hey donna
send me an email
and say all the bad words
you wanna

it will make you feel better
and I love it when
you talk bad

hugs hon

D

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2005-01-31 09:56 AM


mmm... sorry ma'am.. that the day has turned its eyes on the hard side of questions..one's we do not usually ever find an answer to....

hugs... and know ma'am... there are those who care

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-01-31 10:01 AM


Thanks all and hugs,
guess maybe sometimes even us Gentle Spirits
need to say bad words too...lol.
L~
Dark, I might just have to do that...lol.
Ron..

jellybeans
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5 posted 2005-01-31 10:33 AM


oh lady I know 'this' exhaustion alone can bring tears, but exhaustion and existing tears is just too much......
sending hugs
wrap yourself in His arms and come back when you are able

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-01-31 10:38 AM



I am there with you in spirit ~ wrapping warm comforting arms about you and listening to you to pour your gentle heart out...


Linda

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-01-31 10:54 AM


understanding here


Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2005-01-31 10:59 AM


don't read anymore today then...

take a break and we will all man the watch.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

vandana
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9 posted 2005-01-31 11:00 AM


nice words
LeeJ
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10 posted 2005-01-31 11:01 AM


hugs and bright smiles sent your way
Robert Frazier
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11 posted 2005-01-31 11:02 AM


HUGS!

Robert

MyHeartofShadows
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12 posted 2005-01-31 12:44 PM


I do a lot of reading here, not much posting, and I am really touched by your words here.

Krawdad
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13 posted 2005-01-31 05:00 PM


Indeed, there are days like that here.
Good to hear someone else express it.

e

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2005-02-01 09:32 AM


again, my thanks to you all for bearing with me through the moody muse....
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