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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-01-30 11:44 PM



You
of the warmth
now at a price,
you
of the memory
and brittle advice,
I never expect more
than I ask of myself,
yet I asked of myself
why do I know you,
was there ever a choice?

It is Life which needs us,
not the other way ‘round,
it thrives on cooperation,
the silent touch
and boundless joy
of recognition
in the moment
of awareness.

©2005 by icebox

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1 posted 2005-01-30 11:48 PM


If I had to answer the question, I'd have to say "Yes, but..." because I have never known that feeling to be wrong. There is invariably a connection.

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-01-30 11:56 PM


Very nice...James
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-01-31 02:18 AM


well...I'll keep my thoughts to myself

well done write

Martie
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4 posted 2005-01-31 08:45 PM


icebox

"It is Life which needs us,
not the other way ‘round,"

I found that statement very interesting...never thought of it that way.

"it thrives on cooperation,
the silent touch
and boundless joy
of recognition
in the moment
of awareness."

and this is a beautiful!


DavePage
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5 posted 2005-01-31 08:53 PM


Excellent words.

Dave

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2005-02-01 12:32 PM


Wonderful choice of words,
weaved like a tapestry..

Love and Hugs
~ARh

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7 posted 2005-02-01 01:18 AM


I live for those moments.



But you knew that.


iliana
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8 posted 2005-02-01 01:40 AM


So well said!   ....jo
Kahlil
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9 posted 2005-02-01 09:45 AM


one of those moments...yes...

K

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