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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-01-30 11:23 PM



Oh come to where you belong
I know you've waited so long
So today I'll sing a song
Stand still you'll have to be strong

Oh boy...
She plays you like a toy
and when..
I see you through your window
I watch
When you are about to go.
tell me
You look at me with your sad eyes
wonder
Can you see through my disguise?

Maybe I am just a friend.
There are rules we all cann bend

Hmmmmm..... These words poppd in to my head. There is really no depth or thought, just simplicity.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

© Copyright 2005 Juju - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-01-30 11:47 PM


A nice flow...James
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-01-31 01:44 PM


good stuff!
Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2005-01-31 05:32 PM


Thank you.

Kinda a noddy poem. Girl being a friend to be more than a friend. heheh\

Juju

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