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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-01-30 11:06 PM

Heavy and moist the air
As jungle heat rising, in the velvet of dark and cavernous halls
Absent of leaf and languid in a primal beckoning
Aglow in a golden drape, invisible places
Consuming reasons that pant in the mists
Enlivening my skin with magic
Connecting me in ancient language
Rippling to the curve of spine and familiar rhythm
I know you…invisible and stoic in a regal gaze
That blushes first upon my cheek and next upon my thoughts
Still budded from a lingering spring, in ceaseless succulent rose
The winter, in it’s all and knowing sleep redeems me
Another reason longer, tender and aware in every perfect lace
Until I have restored the balance of caution and intimate speculation
Movement slowing in your pattern of stripe and honey buff
Feeling the hum of uncertainty, reflexive and gleam
Low in your throat that burn in strings against a starlight sky
And I can only wonder as I look into your eyes
If I shall be devoured, or lavished
Heavy and moist the air
Your breath upon my neck

Copyright Kkh 01/30/05

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-31-2005 11:27 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-01-30 11:48 PM

A luscious flow of words...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-01-31 12:25 PM

"And I can only wonder as I look into your eyes
If I shall be devoured, or lavished"

~ You've got me wondering as well! Either way, you come out a winner! lol

EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-31 02:14 AM

enjoyed this

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-01-31 09:28 AM

Kathleen~

'I know you…invisible and stoic in a regal gaze
That blushes first upon my cheek and next upon my thoughts'

The beauty of your thoughts brush ever-lightly against my heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-31 11:15 PM

love that ending - entire piece is lovely

enjoyed greatly -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2005-01-31 11:20 PM

primal and passionate
yet graceful and regal
a picture that draws the reader in

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2005-02-01 07:16 AM

Nobody does this like you, TD.

Outstanding.

~tier

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2005-02-01 03:23 PM

Excellent!

Eric

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

9 posted 2005-02-01 03:40 PM

Very well written.

Well worth a lot of reads.

Dave

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