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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2005-01-30 03:46 PM





People having thoughts, of some kinda Love
And some talking to, Souls up above
But here I sit, with the same lonely me
Knowing my Cupid, can no longer see.

She can’t see to shoot, an arrow straight
And She told me that, I waited too late
To show the Feelings, I have inside
That I was too good, when I tried to Hide.

The dawning of Life, has reached the Sunset
And I know I’ve Had, as Good as I’ll get
But there’s still a spark, a little flicker
Maybe there’s room for more, inside my Ticker.

My Daddy’s name, was Price Valentine
And he paid his Price, as I will pay mine
Was it heriditary, a self-destruct gene
Or were we just meant, somewhere in between?

On the Fourteenth, I won’t send a card
Remember his Birthday, but I will try hard
To remember how good, it used to be
As here I sit, with the same lonely me.


01-30-2005

Del "Abe" Jones

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Gaia
1 posted 2005-01-30 09:16 PM


*Happy Valentine's Day:

Can I wish you a Happy Valentine's Day?

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2 posted 2005-01-31 02:21 PM


it's just a day to me...maybe some day it will actually be something to celebrate
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3 posted 2005-01-31 02:25 PM


Abe~

'The dawning of Life, has reached the Sunset
And I know I’ve Had, as Good as I’ll get
But there’s still a spark, a little flicker
Maybe there’s room for more, inside my Ticker.'


You can bet your sweet bippy
there's a little flicker
of love in soft surround~

You are WONDERFUL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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