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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-01-30 01:08 PM




To give the younger self a chance
to express his earnest self
inspirational pieces
needed to confirm an identity
confirm who he is
the name's on a delicate swing


What with social security number
and a way with words
think he'd make success by now
a literary windfall
but the words are like pebbles
tsunami strewn
deposited between preconceived boulders
eroded by new age thought
ignored by contemporaries..


bounced between the future and past
the present, the best place to be
comfort zone for the senses
needs to be confirmed
match a license number
establish 'la veridad'
the pendulum continues to swing...




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Gaia
1 posted 2005-01-30 09:19 PM


words that swing in a precarious breeze
yes, I do understand this
enjoyed

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-01-31 02:12 PM


nice ending there
froggy
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Michigan
3 posted 2005-01-31 09:18 PM


Enjoyed this one.

Within this heart you'll find love

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