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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2005-01-30 01:01 PM



starlings,
like licorice q-tips
atop uppermost branches,
clean clusters of cloud cavities
that we might better hear
the thunderous entrance
of the coming spring

©January 30, 2005

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2005 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
1 posted 2005-01-30 02:31 PM


And I say...."bring it on, bring it on"

Dreaming a little VAS?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-01-30 03:30 PM


I "like" your simple simile ~ and I smile at your Spring sentiments!

Love & Light,
EA

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