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Open Poetry #34

Jakespeare

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-01-30 12:23 PM

Oh there ain’t much to do
up here in the mountains
The river ripples
under good moonshine

A shack on the bank
can sure be cozy
with a fresh straw bed
and a single light

There’s nothin’ better
at night in summer
with the crickets chirpin’
in the air so cool

than to see Ellie Mae
her fine young body
comin’ down barefoot
to share the view

TexUS
Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

1 posted 2005-01-30 12:47 PM

CUTE!

Thanks for the

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2005-01-30 12:50 PM

Thank Alicat.

He started it!

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-30 01:46 AM

cute

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

4 posted 2005-01-30 10:10 AM

Oh, good -- very, very good! You have a touch with words that's magnificent.

Makes me think of a country girl I'd like to lay eyes on about now.

~~J

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-30 12:44 PM

Loved this!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-01-30 02:15 PM

LOL... I like this humor from you very much!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2005-01-30 02:25 PM

good, humorous and so vividly visual. Man,
makes one want to find their own cottage.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-04-24 01:30 AM

I was wondering in such a beautiful mountain scene you did not mention girls till last s with a negative tune. ?

enjoyed and ?

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