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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-30-2005 12:23 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Oh there ainít much to do
up here in the mountains
The river ripples
under good moonshine

A shack on the bank
can sure be cozy
with a fresh straw bed
and a single light

Thereís nothiní better
at night in summer
with the crickets chirpiní
in the air so cool

than to see Ellie Mae
her fine young body
cominí down barefoot
to share the view
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TexUS
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1 posted 01-30-2005 12:47 AM       View Profile for TexUS   Email TexUS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TexUS

CUTE!  

Thanks for the
Huan Yi
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2 posted 01-30-2005 12:50 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi

Thank Alicat.

He started it!

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum29/HTML/001808.html

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passing shadows
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3 posted 01-30-2005 01:46 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

cute
James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines


4 posted 01-30-2005 10:10 AM       View Profile for James_A_Fraser   Email James_A_Fraser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for James_A_Fraser

Oh, good -- very, very good! You have a touch with words that's magnificent.

Makes me think of a country girl I'd like to lay eyes on about now.



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5 posted 01-30-2005 12:44 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Loved this!

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suthern
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6 posted 01-30-2005 02:15 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

LOL... I like this humor from you very much!
Magnus
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7 posted 01-30-2005 02:25 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

good, humorous and so vividly visual.  Man,
makes one want to find their own cottage.
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8 posted 04-24-2007 01:30 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

I was wondering in such a beautiful mountain scene you did not mention girls till last s with a negative tune.  ?

enjoyed and ?
 
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