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At Night - Tied with Summer Winter 98/99
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At Night - Tied with Summer Winter 98/99 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I look at night I walk the streets I look at the night I look at the cold Such a pretty sight Teach me heart It's all that matters Teach my life It's not in shatters Let the rain Make me whole again Let the truth Wash away my pain |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As the night gives us pause, and the rain clears the passages for new dawns...it is what dawns within us that determines the next of steps. Well done Dave. TD |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks TD. Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Speaks a lot of things to me. Enjoyed this one :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Let the rain Make me whole again Let the truth Wash away my pain" Those ending lines were really powerful to me. Nice write. ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
froggy Speaks a lot of things to me. Enjoyed this one The rain at night has always been evocative. Not so much singing in the rain, nor crying in the rain, more dancing in the rain, but to a slow number. Dave *Alli4000* "Let the rain Make me whole again Let the truth Wash away my pain" Those ending lines were really powerful to me. Nice write. Almost like a baptism as ideas are swept away in the water and hope renews it's plea. Dave |
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