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Monkeyluv74
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since 2003-06-07
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0 posted 2005-01-28 08:06 PM


The sun is dripping sweet pearls of fire,
Demons wait unspoken in silent feilds
Light seems to promise hope in empty words,
Slowly twilight springs upon quivering angels,
The first tear is floating down a supple pale face,
Evil souls become restless as the time goes by
The last bit of luminosity slips beneath the bleak terrain,
Fearful eyes dialate in the sinister atmosphere,
The angels ancient awarness advise them that they are surrounded,
The tear plummets to the soil,
The angels are gone,
Unexpected to humanity hope is absent,
The demons move on to easier tagets,
Complete obliteration,
Earth is finally at peace....



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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-01-28 08:12 PM


No, no - let's not give in to nothing, and build a peaceful something -

Interesting thoughts in this-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-01-28 09:13 PM


Inner meaning on this.

Basically until all is destroyed there will be no peace.

Unfortunately something survives and then starts to develop.

Like to see another poem on what then develops.

Good write.

Dave

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