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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-01-28 06:46 PM


At Least A Lifetime


Everytime she slides into my  arms
I melt into her silky charms.
Everything I admire about her,
all of my desires for her
find their dreams coming true.

"Sweetheart, if you would
let me, I would spend at
least a lifetime with you."

I'm willing to
go a little longer
if you wish.


JamesLee
January28
2005


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DavePage
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1 posted 2005-01-28 07:21 PM


Good one James.

I like it.

Dave

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-01-28 08:19 PM


Love the end - sweet -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2005-01-28 10:15 PM


Hey James

This was absolutely gorgeous.  I loved it!

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Beki
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
4 posted 2005-01-29 05:11 PM


AND THAT'S LOVE - VERY SWEET AND TENDER
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-01-29 06:38 PM


nice
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6 posted 2005-01-29 07:59 PM


Sweet, romantic write!

~Alli~

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A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2005-01-31 11:25 PM


James your heart is so sweet~

Enjoyed as always~

~ARh

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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