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Open Poetry #34

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-01-28 05:50 PM

If
in the soft
last
light of dusk
you pause

beside the long road,...
beneath the faint
just apparent stars,

and somehow,
for it all,
being moved
you cannot move,

remember us
who once, as you,...
in times
beyond the now you see,

becoming light

felt our hearts
with equal awe

absorb
the sacred hour.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-01-28 08:01 PM

Excellent.

Dave

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2005-01-28 09:16 PM

Beautifully done, John!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2005-01-30 10:37 AM

I try to learn from every poet whose work I read....with you it's easy, a pleasure.

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*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-01-30 12:41 PM

Love this!

~Alli~

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-24 01:33 AM

ah, so beautiful but never know what you are talking about.
I may just read twice next time.

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