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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-28-2005 05:50 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


If
in the soft
last
light of dusk
you pause

beside the long road,...
beneath the faint
just apparent stars,

and somehow,
for it all,
being moved
you cannot move,

remember us
who once, as you,...
in times
beyond the now you see,

becoming light

felt our hearts
with equal awe

absorb
the sacred hour.


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1 posted 01-28-2005 08:01 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

Excellent.

Dave
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2 posted 01-28-2005 09:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautifully done, John!
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I try to learn from every poet whose work I read....with you it's easy, a pleasure.

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Love this!

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5 posted 04-24-2007 01:33 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

ah, so beautiful but never know what you are talking about.
I may just read twice next time.
 
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