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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-28 04:57 PM

sunshine shimmers sweetly
upon languid lids lazing
in pretty pose pleasure
beneath the bright light beauty
of glancing golden glow
in daydream drawn delight

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2005-01-28 06:42 PM

i think i'm going to stay
right here .... don't move me.

S~

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-01-28 07:29 PM

Susan

It is so expressive.

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-28 07:48 PM

Sat in my car a bit at lunch and let the sun bathe my eyelids - mmmm - simply wonderful -

thank you Snow - don't move - just delight

thank you Dave - it felt good too -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-01-29 08:08 AM

simple songs sown
in serious seduction
seeping susan sighs

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2005-01-29 08:48 AM

Loved this Susan! Absolutely loved it. I will have to try my hand at this style this weekend. It sounds so sweet upon my lips this morning.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-01-29 11:21 AM

Dark -

EV2 - would love to see what you do with alliteration - will keep my eyes out for it-

Hugs -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-29 02:51 PM

Enjoyed.

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2005-01-30 12:04 PM

literally alluring alliterative

smiling Sun song

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-01-30 10:10 AM

oh my....you paint quite a vivid picture!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2005-01-30 10:46 AM

Susan's seamless verses scintillate, seduce the peruser's senses........

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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2005-01-30 11:49 AM

smiling at such sweet sunny replies - thank you my friends

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2005-01-30 12:16 PM

Very nicely composed Susan. Good choices
and an excellent blend into pure silken
words.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2005-01-30 07:17 PM

Thank you dear Barry - I always enjoy seeing your name and your kind replies-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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