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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-01-28 04:26 PM

{From my Journals of Endless Winter}

Anyone can touch the rains afternoon

      Alone I  hear the tap of water
tangle the light  --coming from morning

these moments:

pass  the space of my windows
turning blue fields into sky

&the songs we heard long ago under stars
reflect  orchids on black water

of these moments I write:

to remember the reflection
of your skin--ash and smoke
against mine

&watch

the edge of darkness
spill      silence
with gentle palm

I will write of you
from winters view
and naked flesh
         of life inside

down to the sketch of you
        amber and green

whisper in night

      finger to lips

left breathless for his touch

even time can
break  stone

~~~~

{GIMD}

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2005-01-28 04:38 PM

You are a very colorful writer and I like the positive emotion shared at the end of your poem here that even stone can be broken in time. Enjoyed reading. -Bob

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-01-28 04:46 PM

never stop sharing your journals with us dear friend...

ever....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2005-01-28 05:15 PM

I will write of you
from winters view
and naked flesh
         of life inside

down to the sketch of you
        amber and green

whisper in night

      finger to lips

left breathless for his touch

even time can
break  stone
   Damn.....

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2005-01-28 05:41 PM

Bob, Donna

Thank you both for stopping by to read my winter tales.....hugsssss

~

Ron~

thank you....for understanding the words....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2005-01-28 06:10 PM

time... and stone... I understand..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-01-28 06:48 PM

Enjoyed...James

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