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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-28 07:17 AM


Touching a Berm

Birthstone…a molecular articulation
Beautiful high berms, dancing with life
Primrose oil staring out at silhouettes
Justifies panoramic views
Friendly hills & high tides
Finding positive to cure
Tinsel town is a rural optimist
Wall Street watches a perilous landing
Nomads painting forever homes
Places, to raise children
Between floors and ceilings
Listening to voices of moon dust
Coming from Solar Plexus
Where a million fibers connect
Cause comes back to effect
The seed…shards of colonizing waves
Flipping each page
Curving echoes play in the clouds
Rich marbling of skin rubbing foreheads
Ships of twilight sprawling full length
Standing at the door looking like a redwood
Oxygen worlds polishing questions
Mingling with a floor plan of sun
Wonderful cities smile kudos
Where walkways grow into amber crystal arms
Roadways and paths of humankind

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-01-28 07:36 AM


LeeJ
"Oxygen worlds polishing questions
Mingling with a floor plan of sun"
Good morning and have a good floor plan
today.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-01-28 08:09 AM



universal solvent
lots of water kills berms

(flashflood 101)

lee j you just keep pulling
the prizes out
are there really any cracker jacks
in that box at all?


Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-01-28 08:17 AM


Ships of twilight sprawling full length
Standing at the door looking like a redwood
Oxygen worlds polishing questions
Mingling with a floor plan of sun
Wonderful cities smile kudos
Where walkways grow into amber crystal arms
Roadways and paths of humankind


Lee you have such and amazing way with imagery and I love how you use it.

HopeS
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4 posted 2005-01-28 10:18 AM


Wow !!! Lee not only a panoramic view , you give kaleidescope of wonderful images

Hope

JL
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5 posted 2005-01-28 10:51 AM


I think you have a magic pen you used to write these wonderful verses.
Extremely well written, Lee J.

JL


Martie
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6 posted 2005-01-28 12:04 PM


LeeJ

Feeling poetic envy here after reading such a wonderful poem.  

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7 posted 2005-01-28 06:39 PM


fantastic~


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