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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2005-01-28 05:43 AM



In the morning when I wake,
Oft times before the Sun can break
From the lengthy winter night
I walk the rooms without light
Amidst the shadows that are barely there
Through the windows that the cold streets share.
I don’t really need to see
To fix my morning coffee,
A flip of a button
And it’s begun.
So I sit in the chair and wait
With visions sleeping couldn’t sate
Rolling through my mind
Before the day’s reality can blind
With actions and emotions brought
Then those dreams will be forgot.
The coffee’s done
And dreaming is done
With a careful sip
Across a lonely lip.

Gloom

© Copyright 2005 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2005-01-28 06:15 AM


Edgar Alan Gloom

Was there a raven above your door when you wrote this...if so it was a good muse to have visit.

enjoyed, even though it is gloomy
__________ice
   ><>

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-28 07:53 AM


kinda felt that way myself this morning...brrrr...cold as anything here today....

thought hugs to ya

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

3 posted 2005-01-28 08:27 PM


Good to read your writing again
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
4 posted 2005-01-28 09:58 PM


Thank you, Ice,
High praise indeed,
The great Baltimore Poet was Poe.
I posted a rewrite more in his style.

Thank you, LeeJ,
Pleased you enjoyed, your response warmed me

Thank you, Copperbell,
Glad you enjoyed,
Things have been busy of late
With change of careers and some travel
Finding little time to write
And I apologize for my lack of responses of late.

Gloom

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