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Chemistry |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Alchemist brew chemical stew the old and new a pinch of modern sense reference to what happens next a life of homegrown nonsense scripted to the music of the sun at day the fires of Mars the passion of Venus... new and old a pile of pretense referred to what dawns hence chemical stew alchemist brew |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok...so you have me pondering...  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Martin, You got my mind thinking on this one. I enjoyed reading it though. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very clever and smoothly written! enjoyed. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thank you Marcel, although I think I rather skimped on the descriptiveness... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think it was just enough |
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