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melancholy you |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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it was a little sad: you, telling stories of sometime when things weren't like this. you were a glass, half empty... singing nostalgic in blue and grey. you cried, lost in clouds and puddles and useless dreams. a spider, your web torn, dripping from the rain. home was resting at your feet... and you were a glass, half empty. He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. [This message has been edited by GG (01-28-2005 02:18 AM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this is so well written - and fitting to the title - excellent  susanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
keep up the poetry writes  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Susan, thanks! I'm glad you think so. And I thought melancholy would sound better then pessimistic lol ...Take care ecrivan, Thank you, sir I'll write as long as my muse speaks!Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you were a glass, half empty... singing nostalgic in blue and grey. Your title choice is perfect... I liked this very much! *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you cried, lost in clouds and puddles and useless dreams. yes Alyssa and I can't help but feel very drawn to your words this morning. You are an exceptional writer. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Alyssa You most certainly have a way with words. Beautifully done. Take care...........Sue I am in motion |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
You write melancholy here very very well. I liked the part about the spider's web. Poor little spider, but spiders are pretty industrius aren't they....? Soooooo, I guess, now, I don't feel too bad. (Smiles) -Bob |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
suthern, I'm glad you think so Thank you much!Gentle Spirit, wow, thanks! I'd disagree, but still, thanks.  I hope most of your days don't begin so melancholy...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, as are you. Sue, good to hear from you. I hope things are well for you. And thank you for reading and commenting. You take care, as well...Bob, is that what it takes to be optomistic? Yikes, I don't think I can do it! I'm much better at melancholy lol ...maybe someday, though. Thanks for your reply, sir!He was a man of sorrows |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alyssa~ Sitting here reading in absolute admiration at the expressive word-growth of you~ *HUGS* *HUGS* *HUGS* *Little Huglets Too*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Marge, it's weird to look at my writing when I started here and look at it now. While I know I'm far from being a good writer, I can still see how far I've come, and it's pretty exciting. I'm still just writing to get it off my chest, though. But that's alright with me lol ...Thanks for having been there through it all. Take care, dear lady. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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