navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » regarding want to
Open Poetry #34
Post A Reply Post New Topic regarding want to Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-27 07:04 PM



for just the flavor of
vanilla shoelaces
holding my eyes together
in a dark shoe movie

I would kiss your hands
at the neck of you
wrist love with fingers
pretending to be hair

would you drape my shoulder
with thumb and index ponytails
breasting my sides satyrical
with rib breaking tease

and make me easy in my want to
have you round for philter
on some fancy seamed dream
a table for just one more

than this doggerel sighed side of me
_________________

Dark

© Copyright 2005 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

1 posted 2005-01-27 07:52 PM


in flicker light
the double knots
bind our wrists
under the skin,

tethered

to wrist love fingers
and a table
serving ribald dreams.

regarding want to,

a hunger strike
seems unlikely
when your eyes
look at me like that.


Wanna stay for the double feature?

Indigo


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-01-27 08:14 PM


Impressive D.  Very very impressive.
M' likes this one Dark...

MGROVES
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
3 posted 2005-01-27 10:11 PM


interesting m'friend


Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-27 10:50 PM


sipping sigh tinged philter
elixer mixed theater
table top fixation
dancing in deliniation
for your want to eyes

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2005-01-28 07:37 AM


ms indi,
dare me to struggle
your intentions
lest the bindings
make imprints
at the seam
of your seeming

______________


ms groves, thank you for the eyes here


_________________

gs, you always smile me
with your touch of gentle


_________________

suesin, altar of whispers
and a sacrifice of sooth
soulseepspeaking
my mouth mind to worship
thank you babe

Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

6 posted 2005-01-28 08:31 AM



And when the lights come up
will you still be there?

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2005-01-28 08:38 AM


ms catrina..lights?
but my sweet
they are on
and we are the stars
for a thousand eyes

thanks lady

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-01-28 12:46 PM


brings to mind

light and fluffy textures
beautifully remote
precious soft twilight lingers
inspirational art...with a story yet
to be written...with loving hands and
whispered words...and freedom to be delivered


Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2005-01-28 02:08 PM


lee j
you wear the white dress today
and stand with the sun behind
smiling at my eyes
as you close them
with your fingers

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » regarding want to

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary