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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-27 09:13 AM


While your away
I’ll hang my wall drug
Wearing the cap of 50 states
Honesty, the killing fields
Cutting my over the ears hair
Cuz your sound messes my make-up
With misterioso voice…and yes
The musica translates choice
Thank you for that, you feed me
Alphabet soup..Without bed side manners
Or Rules….
You make me a wanna-be Zen Monk
Lifting your bad moods
Soaking them
In green tea
What say we rediscover the creek pool?
Standing every house on its back
Gazing at the blue corn moon
With ancient water and cottonwoods
Walking the tarmac of Heaven with you
Would be like a well nourished word
None of which stays behind
You’re an animal with 50 fingers
Think I’ll name you soft wind
Before you wings come forth
Taking me to your self taught nights
The ones that pronounce reference books
Telling me I’m your political event
Current and one of a kind
With no pre-sale tags
Just obscene livelihood
Teach me what you know
Embroider me winged fabric
Dunflowers & daisies would be nice
Visual & sonic pleasure
Clashing symbols of visa versa
Babe, just wait until you get home
They’ll be biscuits in the oven
Opps…so much for safe manliness?

Babe, it's cold outside?



[This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-27-2005 11:32 AM).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-01-27 09:17 AM


you sure have a way with words

I'm in awe

Catrina
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since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

2 posted 2005-01-27 09:53 AM


Thank you for that, you feed me
Alphabet soup..Without bed side manners
Or Rules….

~~~

It is indeed cold outside...
grab the warm and head
for the flames.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-01-27 10:17 AM


With misterioso voice…and yes
The musica translates choice
Thank you for that, you feed me
Alphabet soup..Without bed side manners
Or Rules….


this rocks Lee, and again
you have provided such an insightful read. HUGS

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2005-01-27 10:22 AM


I like this

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2005-01-27 10:31 AM


Your words come to life through your visualizations in living.
You are->one-heck-of-a-great-poet!

Enjoyed the read.

JL



Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-01-27 11:23 AM


this has got to be one of my favorites - biscuts in the oven - oh yes - lovin' every word of this

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

MGROVES
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california
7 posted 2005-01-28 04:04 AM


yep~you sure do have a way with words~
and i so enjoy reading them


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