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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-26 11:03 PM



i might have posted this here, don't remember (sorry if i have) but it was brought back to my attention tonight on my own site and i was reminded how much i like this one.


one of my favorite paintings

When MP3 (the reading was done before i did a bit of reworking on the piece)


  


"Flaming June" by: Frederick Leighton

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

© Copyright 2005 Snow - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2005-01-26 11:18 PM


ah, the ache of the wait..

again, excellent work here

ctowen
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2 posted 2005-01-26 11:25 PM


sometimes the wait is more intriguing then what we find ......

            ... here's to facing the "When"!


                                   * S

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3 posted 2005-01-27 06:24 AM


Beautiful, bard like...

Goldenrose.

Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper).

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-01-27 06:56 AM


this fabulously takes the reader to a place in your heart...wonderfully articulated and the picture holds your words hand in hand
whiskey
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5 posted 2005-01-27 07:46 AM


Beauitful piece, really good

Julie

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6 posted 2005-01-27 07:48 AM


would be a whisperer
if just a kiss
would sooth the sigh

enjoyed this snowy

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-01-27 10:43 AM


you gotta know I love this very much
JL
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8 posted 2005-01-27 10:51 AM


What a nice presentation, and poetry!
Enjoyed.

JL


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9 posted 2005-01-28 09:08 AM


This touches me on so many levels... including a knowing... Beautiful work!!!
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with you
10 posted 2005-01-28 10:10 AM


yes, I love this pic too....
and your words are so gorgeous here they combine beautifully!

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11 posted 2005-01-28 10:18 AM


truly lovely Snow and I am glad you were reminded of it and brought it here. Truly one of your best.
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