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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-01-26 10:36 PM



Having Fulfilled A Fantasy


As we shed our clothes
Upon the soft white sand
The sea looked inviting
We entered hand in hand

Swimming and teasing
Splashing about playfully
Dipping  into pleasures
To the rhythm of the sea

As we slid side by side
Bodies motion sensually
Thrills surge throughout
Waves caress endlessly

Neath a glowing sunset
We emerge from the sea
Embracing by the shore
Having fulfilled a fantasy

HopeĀ©2005

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1 posted 2005-01-26 10:40 PM


beautiful!

JL
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2 posted 2005-01-27 03:22 PM


Oh yeah!
Excellent write!

JL

DavePage
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3 posted 2005-01-27 03:33 PM


Lovely words Hope but how many Great White Sharks did you eat.

Loved it.

Dave

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4 posted 2005-01-27 03:56 PM


Hope you little devil you!  I was just reminded of how my son got born   Glad you fulfilled your fantasy lady and I hope you are feeling way better too.

The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious.
It is the source of all art and science.
Albert Einstein

~ Carpe' Diem ~

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-01-27 04:24 PM


Wonderful write!

Eric

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6 posted 2005-01-27 06:09 PM


Absolutely beautiful...the vision and feel of this poem is senually wonderful...*hugs*

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7 posted 2005-01-27 07:08 PM


So very nice...James
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8 posted 2005-01-27 08:22 PM


Nice one!

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