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Open Poetry #34

My Poetry is Glue

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-01-26 07:57 PM

My Poetry is Glue

Why then all the hyperbole
if said is said, and all you want is free?
Your chocolate carriage awaits, your highness!

As your humble life’s escort I will bless
your goings - with a wedding rose to attest
the cake was indeed a pleasure, but I need a rest.

Oh, and take your patented love with you
cause it killed mans best friend: “Old-Blue”
The front porch?No worry, it’s for firewood too.

By the way, my poetry is glue!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-01-26 10:34 PM

An interesting write JL.
I'm not sure I understand that part of your poetry is glue. The second verse was captured in a very crisp and strong worded edge. I liked this, it was different than your usual style.

If your poetry is glue...it is cohesive, flexible and I'm stuck on it!
TD

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-27 06:42 AM

out with the bad, in with the good!!

Well thought out write

Yipppeeeee, its good to see you posting again...welcome home buddy....smiles and hugs

Your poetry, my friend, is stuck on me...hmmmm, reminds me of a song

I am stuck on bandaide cuz bandaides stuck on me....hehehhehe...will that be bobbing around in your head all day...sorry bro...

Hugs to ya...

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2005-01-27 07:35 AM

Nice cryptic writing Enjoyed it

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-01-27 02:02 PM

Pointed, sharp, excellent thrust -

sad about the front porch, though -

and poetry does keep us glued together when otherwise we might splinter -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-01-27 09:17 PM

Now with this one, you do remind me
of another poet of our own pages, yes,
you do...

However...this speaks of bile, as you wish it to,
but no guile; no, I think not. Just, truism.

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