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David2
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0 posted 2005-01-26 04:33 PM



Lie Close

Lie close beside me, your cheek on my own,
And secure in my arms, rest your sorrow.
Whisper of love in your lush velvet tones,
As we hide from that distant tomorrow.
This eve’s our own, let us love full and free,
Let each moment be deemed ours forever,
To savor these hours of sheer ecstasy,
Spent in perfect communion together.
Look in my eyes, let my love be revealed,
With your hand on my heart feel my passion.
Each former sadness forever concealed,
As we love in this wonderful fashion.

Within our arms lies this heaven on earth,
Let us protect its unparalleled worth.

© Copyright 2005 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
Tiersdin
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1 posted 2005-01-26 05:02 PM


Beautifully written, David.


Enjoyed reading!

~tier

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2 posted 2005-01-26 07:54 PM


Ditto to what Tier said!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-01-26 10:29 PM


A beautiful write David
TD

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4 posted 2005-01-26 10:38 PM


soft tender and soo sooo sweet...
*sigh*
very nicely done!

HopeS
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5 posted 2005-01-26 10:55 PM


Wonderful sweet  togetherness , beautifully expressed

Hope

Martie
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6 posted 2005-01-26 11:02 PM


Lovely!!!
MGROVES
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7 posted 2005-01-27 11:21 PM


yes, beautiful


A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2005-01-27 11:30 PM


PASSION, PASSION, PASSION!!!!!

felt it!

Loved it~

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2005-01-27 11:49 PM


Enjoyed...James
JL
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10 posted 2005-01-28 12:13 PM


This is brilliant.  Great write DavePage.


JL


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