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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-01-26 01:39 PM



Heaven
or Hell
is measured
in how

this
is the way
it’s going
to be

until
the day
you die


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
River
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1 posted 2005-01-26 04:45 PM


this is very thought provoking. it makes a good fragment! awesome, (add)

      - River

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

JL
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2 posted 2005-01-26 04:48 PM


Very nice.

JL

*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2005-01-26 07:17 PM


Very powerful write.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Denise
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4 posted 2005-01-27 07:21 PM


Yes it is!
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-24 01:48 AM


true. a serious poem.
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