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Form Divine - Inspired by NakedThoughts
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Form Divine - Inspired by NakedThoughts |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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The form divine, my conflicts and cares What flame supplies in numbers To which my thoughts may soar Invade these restless eyes Knowing by what force my life abides Immortal rhymes gratify to each his own To each his own, may come a jewel Thus complimented by whom? What burdens carry where sun gives light? Doth a loving heart complain or errors naught? A humble voice becomes the beggar Of life, of love My poverty brings death to reason Can your eyes move words to stay? Beyond my dark complexion Beyond my woman’s ways Beyond my raven hair You say I am a pearl? But pearls are lost Sometimes ardent…spilling blood But by the flaws of noble verse Comes the rose of friendships Can you love me in summer cold Or winter’s warmth Can you find peace in who you are? So much so, that your not blind In amorous air And I vow love tender and equal Love in life and death, though I am still with you Share with me the herbs of hope The flowers of sighs Grow with me my love Plough the fields of moan Love for nature Embracing both... Soft beauty and intellectual depth Where design takes place Ignite inspiration and creativity Unbridled enthusiasm and energy To a higher level of moments Making us complete and this is what you own |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
the Wynter does inspire so!!! .... and with such warmth! Excellent write.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiing at the truth you write... besides that, my birthstone is a pearl~~ much to think about in your writings, Lee thank you M |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A treasure....a triumph....words look up to their mistress...thank you.. Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your words echo in the canyons of understanding. Good morning sweet. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You are a shining star with this write Lee J. A divine write! JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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