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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-01-25 06:00 PM


Ten oclock the door was locked
I hadn't made a run for it
I was busy just adjusting to book-keeping, job hunting, Revenue 'yet again', dont they ever learn they fit in with gangster legislation and not a properly constituted business set of rules when you are in one room

US has now
UK thinks it is just inventing it
On the grounds that no-one travels out of the UK

First time I've ever seen my hands tremble on a 3 litre box of wine - well they do weigh a ton, but shut in

And all I had were these words

"when you control someone you destroy them, when you think you have bought them, they will make you pay, they are human and that is the complete "whatever words" problem.

Dave

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1 posted 2005-01-28 04:16 AM


wise words one should live by~
no one should control another~
no one is owned by one either, even if they think they do, they dont't~


LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-28 06:45 AM


excellent theories jump from your mind to ours...very wise and true....
HopeS
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3 posted 2005-01-28 10:21 AM


Hey Dave , you do light and give good insight

Hope

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-01-28 11:19 AM


Thanks everyone.

One of my freelancing brain things that I am surprised anyone read.

I worry that comment like mine above will cease through.

I am not the greatest thinker but when we destroy freedom of choice, we destroy ourselves.

With freedom of choice comes responsibility.

With responsibility comes maturity.

With maturity come the fact that when you screw up, you can not blame anyone else.

Dave

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