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jellybeans
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0 posted 2005-01-25 05:31 PM


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1 posted 2005-01-25 06:59 PM


Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2005-01-25 08:49 PM


Don't I know the rise and fall!
Nicely penned,  jellybeans~

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4 posted 2005-01-26 10:31 AM


Beautifully written, my friend... *S*

And yes... it's that faith that keeps me from sending out an APB for my muse. *G*

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5 posted 2005-01-26 12:50 PM


The very definition of hope in the face of adversity. Enjoyed

Poets against the war is redundant

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6 posted 2005-01-26 12:57 PM


ali, thank you

sunshine, that is beautiful, would it be ok if I use it, the poem would look beautiful inscribed on it

blues...yep, guess we all do, but this time it seemed mine 'had fallen and couldn't get up' lol

suthern, thank you lady, but just like you had faith for mine, I have for yours...course if yours is just lost *helpful look* she could stop by my way anytime *s*

RS...thank you

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7 posted 2005-01-26 12:57 PM


Jellybeans...it is yours...
with my love...


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8 posted 2005-01-26 02:22 PM


thank you *s* it looks beautiful if I can say so myself
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9 posted 2005-01-26 11:01 PM


jellybeans

I loved this, especially the last!!  

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10 posted 2005-01-27 09:55 AM



Jellybeans...

you share well...

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11 posted 2005-01-27 10:25 AM


And... incredibly beautiful becomes more so. *S* Your words and Sunshine's picture make magic together. *S*
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12 posted 2005-01-27 10:41 AM


yes...beautiful is the only word that comes to mind when I see this piece
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13 posted 2005-01-27 10:44 AM


oh gal this one touches, and when coupled with one of Kari's graphics is just lovely!
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14 posted 2005-01-27 11:38 AM


Beautiful, elegant, compassionate...and so so true....you make magic words caress the hearts of all who read...
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15 posted 2005-01-27 01:32 PM


thank heavens for the hope in the words to come - beautifully done

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

jellybeans
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16 posted 2005-01-31 02:47 PM


thank you all.......I am blessed by the inhabitants of these pages of blue
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17 posted 2005-01-31 05:05 PM


sometimes the flickering allows one to see better into the dark . . .

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18 posted 2005-01-31 05:33 PM


Keep the faith, Dear Beans of Jelly! ~ and keep on writing! Lovely presentation!

Love & Light,
EA

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19 posted 2005-02-01 12:26 PM


you presented you heart and poem well...enjoyed both..thanks for sharing!


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