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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
So uncertain and cold along this stretch farewell the last wave held until arms cramp and reality sets these stuttering legs in motion The descent requires soul and must be done alone so frail these stems so empty this heart what remedy to cure the void? Can I bear this space filled anew? looking back how unclear paths taken and fog has descended obscuring any angled view I am frightened cold acutely aware that dreams are no substitute for simple truth ~tier |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 nice!!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write!! JL  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Sometimes in dreams we can touch on the truth which just goes to show that it really is a mixed up world. Nice write. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely lovely Tier M and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this speaks of how the soul fights the right and wrongs of life...the ache of want and desire...even when we know it's wrong for us, and until we get it right.... absolute poetry |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Your poems are always awesome. ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
fragile and beatuiful all at once in its vulnerability |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
how unclear paths taken and fog has descended obscuring any angled view I am frightened cold I am so there, so sad, it feels like it's coming from all sides. Lovely way you write, Tier~ |
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