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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-01-25 02:37 AM




movement’s flashing pains

moonbeams rainbows on the snow

sleep’s forgotten now

©2005 by icebox

© Copyright 2005 icebox - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-01-25 03:54 AM


ssssssssshhhhhhhhh

listen carefully, but easily

I'll whisper-sing a lullabye


Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
2 posted 2005-01-25 05:04 AM



there's an upside?

maybe that's how
i should look at
this 4th day w/one :-)

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

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displaced
3 posted 2005-01-25 05:31 AM


ooooo...ow
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4 posted 2005-01-25 09:54 AM


That, and I get rid of all the left-over chocolate in the house.....

Your senryus are getting better and better -- keep 'em coming!

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Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2005-01-25 12:10 PM


"moonbeams rainbows on the snow"

a chance to see what we might have missed if not for the pain of it..

your words always hit it on the head.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

wandering glider
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aloft
6 posted 2005-01-25 01:05 PM


Only lost in sleep
have I eased this constant pain
these many long weeks

The upside is relative
to the angle of the fall


glider

JL
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7 posted 2005-01-25 02:24 PM


Excellent! Write!

JL

DavePage
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8 posted 2005-01-25 02:42 PM



Just rub that spot
Lower
sleep’s forgotten now

Keep it up

Dave

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9 posted 2005-01-25 07:08 PM


wow....

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Martie
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10 posted 2005-01-25 09:08 PM


Hi icebox

I've never had a migraine...but, my husband has and he says he enjoys the color show that comes first and then takes his vision.

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