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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-24 12:00 PM



Depressing days, this is one
where the snow has ended its fall.
The digging out repeated again
as the plows push the cold to a wall ...

Out I shall go, to move all that snow
or at least the some of the sum.
Maybe the piles will build me a man
if only to shovel this glum.

Yes maybe the answer to feelings this day
is to make some use of the snow.
And dress the build up however I wish.
A picture when done, I shall show~~~~


M

out again~~~

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-01-24 12:48 PM


I wanna see that picture.
Will he be wearing sunglasses and carrying a surfboard?

RSWells
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2 posted 2005-01-24 01:01 PM


To find one that doesn't melt just as things warm would be the trick I suppose. Winter shuts us in (those in snow) and limits the view of our visual landscape/ mind escape. Thoughts forced inward crowd us and that beautiful blanket can smother. To carve a path through it is stressful and many fall to a beaten heart. Enjoyed.

Poets against the war is redundant

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2005-01-24 01:29 PM


well I am too pooped to do the snowman yet... those plows keep pushing the snow onto my walks and I am a corner bus stop so in order not to get fined I have to keep the walks clear...

and the  snow is still a bit too fluffy...as it begins to warm later today it should be easier to build upon plus I have so much piled high I probably will only have to carve one instead of roll one...

now for a warm soak...I have used muscles these past few weeks (between the
no-heat-wood-sawing and the snow shoveling) that I don't even think have a name
  

M

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4 posted 2005-01-24 08:47 PM



Magnus
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5 posted 2005-01-24 08:51 PM


M..we have a nice big hot tub in the back
yard...with the weather the way our's has
been...probably would work wonders on those
nameless muscles...sheesh,  we all seem to
have them, huh?

JL
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6 posted 2005-01-25 02:50 PM


Making a snowman?
I wish at times I could make a snowgirl…
If it would just snow here!

Enjoyed your write.

JL

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7 posted 2005-01-25 07:01 PM


I'm speechless.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

bbent
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8 posted 2005-01-26 03:59 AM


I keep makin snowgirls but there all top heavy and tumble in the wind here...enjoyed your seasonal scribe.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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