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Susan
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0 posted 2005-01-24 12:38 PM


Picture if you will, an aged oak, twisting beautifully, shadowed against the peer of sunset edging darkened skies of blue and gray of storm- and thus the poem . . .


within the pattern
of age etched furrows
and gnarls of trial,
wisdom is woven

despite the storms

or . . .

perhaps because of—

thus she stands strong
surmounting the bitter
of wind tossed rains
and snow frosted winters

rising tall to the occasion
in breadth and resolve
bearing the scars of time’s passing

yes,

she stands

a thing of beauty
in all her worn glory
a proud pedagogue
to the heart of us all

s.a.t.


she - the tree - is a metaphor for those women in my life that have stood the trials and storms of living and yet reflect such great beauty of wisdom earned and soul kept -

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-24 01:35 AM


my heart shed a tear with what was felt here. woman has had it hard as mans fear of the strong and knowledge one holds we seek knowledge wisdom understanding   they take  they control they take down not all but most,  arent they in for a surprise  this was really spoken well thankyou


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-01-24 07:42 AM


ok..now I am into the weed women that I know...no matter how they get plucked
they keep coming back and kick butt on the frillyfooposiepoos...(grin) enjoyed your soulspeak suzz D

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-01-24 07:45 AM


she really is everywoman
and more......

Susan
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4 posted 2005-01-24 02:54 PM


Grin - this is just a salute to those women who are everyday heros of conquering the ordinary and extraordinary of life - like my mother, my sister, my mother-in-law - those who have grown just more beautiful with age and set such a wonderful example for me on living -

Hugs friends - thanks for the replies -

susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2005-01-25 09:25 PM


You write with such grace, Susan.

Gotta love the inked one's reply, and her sweet blondielocks.  


RSWells
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6 posted 2005-01-25 09:48 PM


Liked this on a few levels. I've written of woman's roots and seeds and the binds that run through them (and their unknowing and detached offshoots, men) I have no motivation for such obvious observation, no agenda. Too I love huge old oaks and have an immense one six feet from the door near where I sit. It looms over this bungalow. I stare at it often in wonder. Your pre-poem explanation is poetry as well. Enjoyed

Poets against the war is redundant

Susan
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7 posted 2005-01-26 12:43 PM


Thank you bluesie one for your kind reply - and yes, blondielocks has it right -

RS - mmm, I love the old oaks - love it when am down on the gulf coast in Mississippi and the beauty of the old oak trees with their spanish moss - thanks for your thoughts -

Hugs -     Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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8 posted 2005-01-26 01:09 AM



A conjuring truly enjoyed Susan.

Carpe' Diem

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