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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-01-23 11:44 PM



The many of them
Masses of them
Each one different

From the military
To the coffee shops and bums
And the coffin

They are all the same
Different looks,
Different ways of stride and path

Happy ones and sad ones
Articulate and battered wall of the prisons

Solo beautiful mixed together as a whole
Intricate in this picture that has always moved

And always will even after
The last one has perished to a quiet sleep
Or violent death from which he or she will
Never wake

The hand which paints these pictures is a beauty
I'll never understand
And yet I doubt I'll ever fully accept that fact
And for the rest of my life
Use it as my stride and path
To explain how I look and the emotion statement of
The solo life I live in the midst of masses

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
River
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1 posted 2005-01-24 02:03 AM


beautiful....=) - add

        - River

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-01-24 01:27 PM


itchy...a wonderful write
enjoyed reading this perspective

*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2005-01-24 07:28 PM


Great one!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-01-24 08:13 PM


I like your name. Lol. Awsome poem too.
green_itchy_stuff
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5 posted 2005-01-25 07:02 PM


Thank you everybody.  I've been posting in dark for a while so its cool to see what I write is appreciated.  

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2005-01-26 11:21 PM


you dont walk the path alone, there are many walking beside you.....enjoyed good to see you in open...

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

green_itchy_stuff
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7 posted 2005-01-27 07:57 AM


Yeah, I guess this run in open is experimental, and I'm not exactly sure what I'm experimenting about, but it seems pretty cool so far, so thanks.

=GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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