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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-01-23 06:31 PM


                  Greater Cost


            Preamble to the words


Guy said you struggled to get through your MBA.

Other guy said "yea, 2 years working flat out at nights was hell".

"You qualified", said the guy.

"Yes I qualified, but daylight was hard on the eyes when you come out of the bar", but I met a lot of politicians and members of business administration - of course and we used to pick each other up.


                    The real poem


Daddy said if I was good, I could play around inside my head

Daddy said if I was bad, I was only good for the other crowd.

Daddy said you'll do just fine, nothing stick to you, you'll never stay still long enough, and thoughts for you are threw

Think about it
On a bent substance
That is there directed to be there and worshipped to be there

At no point do two people with nothing in between point themselves at anything

You would be able to see

Unless of cause, the worst of costs
Is someone you might trust
Of value

And that would be a greater cost



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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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1 posted 2005-01-27 07:11 PM


I like this.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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2 posted 2005-01-27 07:14 PM


"Unless of cause, the worst of costs
Is someone you might trust
Of value

And that would be a greater cost"

.
I hear you.  I'm with you on this one.

JL


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3 posted 2005-01-27 11:06 PM


interesting


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