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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-01-23 07:51 AM


My Heart Written Invitation

The reason I am writing
I have been all out of rhyme
So I am asking if you can
Stay a little longer next time

I hope you will call again
Whenever the time is right
As I await your next visit
I wanted something to write

Just me keeping in touch
All I hope for is continuation
Call this my heart request
Here written is my invitation

Visit me sunrise or sunset
Or neath the stars up above
Sharing as we did before
Together heart to heart love

HopeĀ©2005

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-01-23 08:18 AM


Aw how sweet HopeS. How can he not but respond to this invitation. It is beautiful, eloquent, with a touch of the mystique. I hope you get your heart's desire.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Margherita
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2 posted 2005-01-23 09:54 AM


Visit me sunrise or sunset
Or neath the stars up above
Sharing as we did before
Together heart to heart love


I can feel your heart vibrating in these beautiful words, dear Hope!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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3 posted 2005-01-23 12:15 PM


beautiful


JL
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4 posted 2005-01-23 12:55 PM


Very nice HopeS.
Enjoyed.

JL


*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2005-01-23 03:57 PM


Great one!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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