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Galahad

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Huan Yi
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The sun is slowly going down
A bronze tone
lies upon the quiet sea

Flights of sparrows
those brave little warriors small of life
pass across the somber sky

Our standards above the castle walls
gently wave in the autumn air

How else could it be
my honored lord

It was after all
he sought to do
the answer to his prayer


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 01-23-2005 01:39 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Yes, just so.

This is beautiful!

Love, Margherita
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Beautiful write john!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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