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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-23 12:34 PM

~~~

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2005-01-23 01:00 AM

well done

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2005-01-23 01:14 AM

Mmm guess what...LOVED IT! Smelling of cigars and cognac. I haven't smoked a cigar in 10 years...but this poem made me remember it. LOL! Oh my Snow this is such a delight. I think I am inspired...heck no...I know I am inspired. 'Tis time the game was afoot. Time to meld words into pretties.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-01-23 02:04 AM

Good stuff like always!

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-01-23 05:29 AM

awesome yes

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-01-23 06:09 AM

wonderful writing...always leaves me wanting more

*s
M

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2005-01-23 07:54 AM

Sylvia knew your feelings well....she said

"I should have loved a thunderbird instead;
At least when spring comes they roar back again.
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)"

and I add...
But the evidence is there that he was real
Ash and Brandy, lilac scent reveal;
Mornings such as these just stay in bed,
Perhaps you made him up inside your head?

The most excellent poetry always moves me with insperation

as this one has...enjoyed muchly

___________ice
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IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

7 posted 2005-01-23 10:39 AM

yes, this is it.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-01-23 11:37 AM

Excellent - love the image blening with the words -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

9 posted 2005-01-23 01:27 PM

Beautiful Snow.

:-)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2005-01-23 10:45 PM

tired of excellent writers/and writes like this slipping under the radar. back to the top

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