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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-01-22 11:57 PM



Layers and layers and layers
Of
You and me and you and me and

Where it all comes together
Tied
In a knot of
Nots
Maybes

Yes, yes, yes

Thin the skin is
That leaves a mark

You and me and you and me and
In passing…

Did I leave a mark
On you?

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2005-01-23 12:30 PM


i'd venture you leave a mark on everybody you meet
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2 posted 2005-01-23 12:37 PM


hoping it's generally a good one'
and not that ol evil sign
the one I don't believe in anyway

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3 posted 2005-01-23 12:46 PM


yes a good mark


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4 posted 2005-01-23 12:47 PM


smilin a thankyou atcha, my dear McGroves
Aenimal
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5 posted 2005-01-23 02:09 AM


and not that ol evil sign

what the republican elephant? i kid, i kid

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6 posted 2005-01-23 08:38 AM


LOL
ice
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7 posted 2005-01-23 09:11 AM


I am sure you left a bruise....

____________ice/ford
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8 posted 2005-01-23 09:31 AM


maybe
maybe not
yes, probably
LOL

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9 posted 2005-01-23 09:59 AM


Oh, the uncertainty of everything so well expressed ... your beauty, be assured, does leave a mark.

Love, Margherita

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10 posted 2005-01-23 10:07 AM


i understand this and you know  i'm beginning to believe? if we have to even wonder if we touched their precious male egos, as if they were the second coming of christ when they let us touch their precious you know whats, as if we couldnt measure up to their standards, then maybe they weren't even worth it.
sorry........im in a mood
but i do relate too often

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11 posted 2005-01-23 04:02 PM


Great write!

Eric

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12 posted 2005-01-23 04:04 PM


Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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13 posted 2005-01-23 04:07 PM


each interaction leaves a mark - and i bet yours are mainly soul marks of a positive nature - like your heart-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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14 posted 2005-01-23 05:33 PM


namaste, thanks for reading!
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