Work I haven't relased - words

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Open Poetry #34

Work I haven't relased - words

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-01-21 03:27 PM

I wont write new stuff for a long time but there is a lot of old stuff as I work on getting it into better condition that I wouldn't mind seeing the light of day.

Dave

Words

Swords to lacerate my heart
Bleeding
To finality
In mock plays
of Death

Swords to tie my heart
In a circle of steel
Enshined upon my neck
Everything free
But me

Am I the attacker or defender
With words to live with both of you
Or to have no life
As you attack through me
For your desires

Encircling me with steel
That cuts the soul
And grants your desires

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-01-21 03:44 PM

Not a pleasant situation for mind or body.
Enjoyed the emotion, and the read.

JL

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-01-21 10:19 PM

felt lots of confusion here
mixed emotions i guess

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-01-22 04:08 PM

Marsha JL

A feeling you are trapped to write words, trapped by words, trapped by your desire to continue a treadmill of writing words and at some point you ask, why the compulsion.

Dave

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