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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-21 10:42 AM


Ghost shadows crying
Paranormal heart mugging
As one person in a grave
Sharing an Ouija experience
With you from a distance
Straying animal footsteps
Hypnotism’s parade
Flashed o’er misty caps

Feeling like the only woman in town
Prophecies find wind and storm
Praying to bend closer, closer still
Clinging to a golden rose
Where I shall meet death quick
In the face of our sin..

You make the woman in me
Look forth in childish stares
Blossoms breathtaking secrets
Wading in books
I’m going to write all about it

Into your pocket I climb
Towards night we went
You with open arms
Me to God be thanked

Early twilight pampers
Like children of the light
Our sleeves fill up
Craggy rocks are lost to sight
Misplaced inside you
Trusting gentle words
The kind we finger paint
You are the water bearer
Spreading my world

And so…..

Ghost shadows crying
Paranormal heart mugging
As one person in a grave…but
Sharing an Ouija experience
With you from a distance
Straying animal footsteps
Hypnotism’s parade
Flashed o’er misty caps
Painting a bridge to freedom
Engulfing
Believing
Fate is some master plan
Eluding pain and sorrow
We find a loving hand
Takes us...
To a place were (our)
Footsteps live in the sand



[This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-21-2005 12:46 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-01-21 10:50 AM


Into your pocket I climb
Towards night we went
You with open arms
Me to God be thanked


you do make me smile~~~
I happen to love Winter...although handling it alone is sometimes tough


hugs from Southern PA awaiting that storm
M

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-21 10:54 AM


wull call me...we can complain about how much snow we are or are not getting...hehe
Yes, I love the snow to, it's beautiful...but the older I get, the more it hurts to shovel it...hehe

thank you for reading and commenting...guess what...Phantom is in all the movies now...guess where I'll be...large buttered popcorn and coke, and I'll be happy as a clam....hehehe, doesn't take much...does it?


nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2005-01-21 10:58 AM


I've been wanting to see Phantom...but was  hoping not to see it alone...though I have been thinking today about going to the movies by myself...knowing the next 2 days will keep me home shoveling

*s
M

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-01-21 11:25 AM


i liked that pocket very much

and
Paranormal heart mugging
As one person in a grave…but
Sharing an Ouija experience
With you from a distance
Straying animal footsteps
Hypnotism’s parade
Flashed o’er misty caps
Painting a bridge to freedom
Engulfing


so much from the distance, amazing what
we can feel as so tangible

heres another snowwatcher to the west of you a bit in NJ
hoping it's gonna be a washout afterall

JL
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5 posted 2005-01-21 12:02 PM


Your wonderful poetry is truly golden.

Enjoyed the read Lee J.

JL


Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-01-21 12:03 PM


We find a loving hand
Takes us...
To a place were are
Footsteps live in the sand

oh this is lovely Lee!


RSWells
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7 posted 2005-01-21 12:09 PM


For some reason I was transported to windswept moors and another time here. To carry a reader elsewhere (even if it wasn't your intent) is an art. I would have e-mailed this question were it possible but did you mean to write "where our" in the next to last line? Enjoyed

Poets against the war is redundant

LeeJ
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8 posted 2005-01-21 12:46 PM


oppsie!  (our)
DavePage
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9 posted 2005-01-21 02:18 PM


Lee you are just getting better and better.

Dave

*Alli4000*
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10 posted 2005-01-21 07:14 PM


Enjoyed this LeeJ!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

MGROVES
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11 posted 2005-01-21 10:56 PM


always a pleasure to read your thoughts


A Romantic Heart
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12 posted 2005-01-21 11:51 PM


I believe in fate and I have experianced it before...it is a strange feeling....when it came to me I opened the door and accepted it with open arms and an open heart....it was wonderful!

Love and Hugs ~ARH

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