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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-21 08:12 AM



yesterday was busy here
and there too
there was so little time
for what we wanted

to do with each other
and our minds started
even before we did
and still were working after

when the sun went down
and you laughed at me
and said I was faster
then the sun at going down

but you were glad too
that I didn't answer that
since there was so little time
and still a list as long

as your legs and mine
but we wanted it longer
even if it took forever
and never did get done


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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-01-21 08:15 AM


to do with each other
and our minds started
even before we did
and still were working after

when the sun went down
and you laughed at me
and said I was faster
then the sun at going down

All I can do is smile.....


LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-21 08:29 AM


just goes to prove, take quality time with each other, letting all else go, cuz there is nothing more important....

BRAVO
and hugs

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-01-21 10:19 AM


How high can you count, D?  I think I could reach a gazillion!  Smiling here -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2005-01-21 10:45 AM


cool!
Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

5 posted 2005-01-21 04:10 PM


"A list as long as your legs and mine..."

And of course I know you'll take the time
to read it from top to bottom. *grin*

Mmmm... yesss.

Indigo

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-01-21 05:05 PM


and still a list as long

as your legs and mine


love this Mr Dark

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

*Alli4000*
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
7 posted 2005-01-21 06:06 PM


Awesome write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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