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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-01-21 02:17 AM



Closing My Eyes I Drift

Anywhere I need to view
My mind finds a cure
Closing my eyes I drift
Fantasy takes a tour

Every one of your songs
Each day I can play
Closing my eyes I drift
Together we fly away

Fantasy grabs my hand
I know you are there
Closing my eyes I drift
As you stroke my hair

All the secluded places
Fantasy was shared
Closing my eyes I drift
Into dreams we dared

In remembering always
The promises made
Closing my eyes I drift
Our dreams never fade

From out of the shadows
We embrace the light
Closing my eyes I drift
I am with you each night

HopeĀ©2005

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2005-01-21 02:31 AM


A dreamy drifting, so softly, Hope~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2005-01-21 07:33 AM


In remembering always
The promises made
Closing my eyes I drift
Our dreams never fade

From out of the shadows
We embrace the light
Closing my eyes I drift
I am with you each night


believable and heart warming...lovely

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-01-21 07:43 AM


Closing my eyes I drift
I am with you each night
love that...

Hoping you have recovered

M

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-01-21 08:27 AM


I do the same


DavePage
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5 posted 2005-01-21 02:12 PM


You are a really good writer Hope.

Dave

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6 posted 2005-01-21 07:17 PM


Amazing!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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california
7 posted 2005-01-21 10:12 PM


very nice


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