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A word of truce
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A word of truce |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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A word of truce Slip into my mind one more time Let us renew our rhythm Forget not our past But build on the last Each foot of our foundation Strengthening that new sensation Keeping the simple hope Regaining our visions scope Two friends of written word Without sharing would be absurd So I call to you with a plea Here I am on bended knee A word of truce from me to you For this is truly overdue |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thomas~ I'll buy that ! Nice to see you~ *giggles* at your critique comment ...  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Slip into my mind one more time Let us renew or rhythm not sure if you meant "our" rhythm or not enjoyed your thoughts...a compromise or truce...either way, a better course of action M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
marvelous |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thomas, I think she will buy that. Enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Fantastic write Thomas! |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thanks to all of you for your positive comments. Oops I did mean our let me fiix that.  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
GREAT WRITE! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This was a great write, Thomas!!  Thank you so much for sharing!!Hugs, Becka  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 yes a nice write |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Again you bring a smile to my face  Thank you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A brilliant offering here Thomas, and what so many times is overlooked. Enjoyed reading this today. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Truly captivating, dear Thomas! You established the connection beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank you TD and Margherita I am glad that you had the chance to read and reply it is appreciated Thomas |
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