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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-01-20 09:21 PM

View the vibrant colors,
see how they mesh and blend,

collideing, overlapping
onto eachother, no outline,
no end,

take my hand,
let it melt,
into your hand,
becoming one,

I want to be your skin,
covering you head to toe,
being close to you,
wherever you go,

We collide, your heart,
speaks a language,
only my heart can decipher,

Unto every word you speak,
I melt,
intoxication goes even higher,

Every thought blends,
painting our cavas of love,

We are painting a picture,
our love splatters everywhere,
the passion,

amber hues, deepest of red,
passion pours like silken
sheets layered upon my bed,

crash and burn, flames ignite,
the paint peels off the walls,
we feast like ravenous animals
tonight,

Our bodies form one, single,
perfect, shadow,
passionately dancing,
upon the wall,

In every dimension,
heart, mind, body and soul,
we collide....

then, in love we fall...

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-01-20 09:23 PM

I like the heat and color of this - melting paint off the walls - fabulous that

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2005-01-20 09:25 PM

Thank you susan...I guess I am just in a frisky mood tonight~ LOL!

~ARH

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2005-01-21 12:38 PM

I like the flow of your poem and I do like the Oneness expressed as blending colors, one hand, one skin, one heart language, one shadow on the wall, one in heart, mind, body and soul.... Yes, Yes, Yes, that is certainly what love making should be all about.... Becoming One.... and then becoming possibly Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, etc. etc. (Smiles) Enjoyed reading. -Bob

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-01-21 02:15 PM

I like this.

Dave

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2005-01-21 02:52 PM

Goldenrose.xxxxx

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (01-22-2005 12:16 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-01-21 02:54 PM

beautiful writing ARH.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-21 06:39 PM

I ALWAYS love your work!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2005-01-21 10:20 PM

Love and hugs to everyone who has replied and stopped by..thanks for listening and reading me....for being there!

Love ~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-01-23 11:49 PM

Lovely words to read...James

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