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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


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Priest
you waste your time

Not all your prayers and medicines
will do him any good

I have tried
knowing this day might come
to cure him for decades more than you

Flowers have withered
the leaves have fallen
in the garden that was his heart

Let us go
as he wishes so

Goodbye
Farewell to the world I knew

Take care my friend
The night is cold
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Between the Lines


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Flowers have withered
the leaves have fallen
in the garden that was his heart


am in a touching mode this morning...
Your words agree with me

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LeeJ
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TRISTAN and ISOLT?

beautifully written
Drauntz
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sad.
 
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