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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-20 07:01 AM


Snow

Snow of clouds flies white
And none the same fall the night
A nature’s nightgown

While trees are fitted with a crown
Of icicles grown upside down

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-20 07:07 AM



Ever picturesque...

~*~


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2005-01-20 11:43 AM










*ww*

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-01-20 12:00 PM



Leave it to our resident Moth Queen
to bring it all into perspective...

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2005-01-20 12:17 PM


oh!

Somehow? The snow in New Orleans didn't DO that!



Beatiful Sy! and very groovy follow-up moth lady!
Hugging seymour (oooh, watch the coffee, lovie!) There ya go, no harm done.

Have a kiss too.

Thomas119gold
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5 posted 2005-01-21 12:16 PM


It has been awhile since I have had the opportunity to read your poems.

Hope to catch up on them

Enjoyed this one since the only snow in Biloxi is in the freezer.

Tom

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2005-01-21 01:04 AM


You paint the winter so crystal clear, Sy~

Thank you for this picture in all her finery.


Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
7 posted 2005-01-21 02:19 AM


love this!

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

ice
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8 posted 2005-01-21 06:31 AM


Nice form, See-More

Compact, but very visible imagery..

Janets pictures tell the story to the eye..
nice touch J.M.

enjoyed
_________ice/ford
  ><>

LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-01-21 07:27 AM


While trees are fitted with a crown
Of icicles grown upside down


liked that a lot...and snow is on it's way...and so, I will remember this...and look for it...thanks Sy and good morn to ya

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-01-21 07:57 AM


Sunshine
Ever lovely, Hugs.

JM,
The pictures are just right and fit beautifully. Got your email and will answer today if I can. Miss you winkiewinkie


serenity,
You are a bright candle in my night.

Tom,
Just keep the picture LOL Thanks for the read and comment.

Blues,
May the words only warm your mind.

Snow
Your no icicle growing upside down LOL
Thank you

ice
Enjoyed your comment.

LeeJ
Good morning sweet thank you and have a good one.

EvocativeVerse2
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11 posted 2005-01-22 06:28 AM


Love this Seymour...and love the pictures JM. It is snowing here...okay there is a blizzard here and we are getting a sustained 50/mph wind. It doesn't look this pretty...sure wish it did.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

vlraynes
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12 posted 2005-01-22 07:48 AM



Beautiful word painting, Sy...

Hugs, my friend...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-01-22 08:56 AM


EvocativeVerse2
If you se it from the warmth of your house it could look like that. LOL

vlraynes
So nice to see you again,

passing shadows
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14 posted 2005-01-22 09:41 AM


oh Sy! WOW!
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-01-22 09:51 AM


passing,
From a froufrou coms a WOW, thank you sweet.

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16 posted 2005-01-22 11:29 PM


Beautiful!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2005-01-23 08:40 AM


Alli,
Thank you my friend.

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