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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-01-20 05:02 AM



As dew drips from velvet heart of a rose,
so tears do stain my cheek with sorrow.
My desire in striving for a free heart,
for such a golden prize, i would beg and borrow.

Injury is not my design,
my depth does hurt without my perception.
When hearts burn with needed passion,
innocents are scarred by sheer emotion.

Love falls silent, dormant in sleep,
awakenings, newly flourishing soul flowers.
To glut again and feel the heat;
the warmth, the amber glowing love powers.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-01-20 07:40 AM


Very hopeful....I liked this one alot!
Love is powerful and like the earth, the heart has an amber core....red, vermillion, burning hot with love...

~Love and hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-20 07:56 AM


Injury is not my design,
my depth does hurt without my perception.
When hearts burn with needed passion,
innocents are scarred by sheer emotion.


I know this part very well

Love is indeed all powerful
thank you for sharing such richly worded impressions...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-01-20 08:20 AM


nicely done...

M

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