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Susan
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0 posted 2005-01-19 01:35 PM


wearing winter's gray
sunshine, moonshine, starshine bliss
sweet summertime wish

s.a.t.


If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-19 01:39 PM



Bingo!

Susan
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2 posted 2005-01-19 01:41 PM


Thanks Sunshine - now could you send a little of that sun my way?

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2005-01-19 01:49 PM


Though wearing winter's gray, your poem here has a musical rhythm to it that left me feeling quite cheery sitting here in the fog. (Smiles) Thanks dear poetess. -Bob
Susan
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4 posted 2005-01-19 02:23 PM


thanks Bob - glad I could bring you a smile -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-01-19 03:01 PM


it is a balmy 80 here
just got off the black itch
almost too warm to ride
with a shirt on

dang I miss the blizzards
(grin)

Susan
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6 posted 2005-01-19 03:16 PM


Ooooooo - think I'm going to come clobber you for dangling your hot little - um - climate in my face - no fair!

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JL
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7 posted 2005-01-19 04:12 PM


Very nice.

JL


Susan
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8 posted 2005-01-19 04:44 PM


thanks JL - appreciate your letting me know you stopped by -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Magnus
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9 posted 2005-01-19 05:54 PM


absolutelyawesomepicture,settingthescreenonfire!  Wow!
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10 posted 2005-01-19 06:57 PM


Perfect!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2005-01-23 03:13 PM


How blissful is this!
Loved your title too, Susan~

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12 posted 2005-01-23 04:01 PM


Perfect.

Eric

Susan
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13 posted 2005-01-23 04:02 PM


Barry - I blush - thank you dear Sir

Alli- always a pleasure to see your name

Bluesie - thanks my friend - for the kind reply

Eric - too kind - thank you

Hugs all -   Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Snow
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14 posted 2005-01-23 04:05 PM


oh hell, i love this title!
and what follows... excellent, susan!!

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

Susan
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15 posted 2005-01-23 04:09 PM


thank you dear Snow - am sooo ready for summertime and all the magic its lingering days and balmy nights bring -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Beki
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16 posted 2005-01-24 02:14 AM


mad eme smile but I think I would like a dose of spring first
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17 posted 2005-01-24 05:33 AM


oh....nice one
Magnus
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18 posted 2005-01-24 09:11 PM


Susan, you would wear it well, of this I have
no doubt...well done!

Susan
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19 posted 2005-01-24 11:41 PM


Thanks Beki, Dixie and Barry - for your kind replies and your friendship-

We've spring like weather of late - 40s and sunshine - been balm for the soul

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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