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Dear Daughters
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Dear Daughters |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dear Daughters To my daughters of admire Embers of my lives inquire That lights my mind as I grow old And melts the very hold of cold There’s naught that I could say or do Except the coming of a coup When time has drifted in its way And brings old age again in play May embers of your lives inquire? Bring in you your lives admire To feel the glow I have for you That makes my heart write as I do Where love has so enwrapped my mind I can’t express the undersigned And I can only say to you The closest thing would be times coup I bless you here to see the bend And feel as I when comes the end. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing better than a letter to our babes...   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
What more could we wish for our children, grand children, then a fulfilling and peaceful life? Sy, you work a magical wonder...this was lovely... Happy Wednesday....and don't forget, if your a fan of the show Lost...it's on tonight...channel 6 at 8 o'clock. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a lovely gift indeed.....  ~~*~~ |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This is SO beautiful, Sy! Wishing my dad could write like this...such a wonderful gift you have! Have a blessed day, m'friend! God bless, Becka |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
May embers of your lives inquire? Bring in you your lives admire To feel the glow I have for you That makes my heart write as I do Where love has so enwrapped my mind I can’t express the undersigned ================================ Sy-Sy-Sy- your heart-sigh makes even Randy cry.... what a lovely, tender write this is... youre such a cute ole softie LOL   *ww*  Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You touch me with this touching poem. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful keepsake of words for daughters to tuck away, Sy.  Though memories are always close and dear to our hearts, having a little slip of paper with these words written on it in black and white, would be a wonderful gift for someone to have tucked into a treasure box where they can bring it out to read over and over again whenever they feel the need for a hug from their dad. Lucky ladies, to be loved like this. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A write inspired by love and more words left to its testimony. Enjoyed Poets against the war is redundant |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I agree, Hugs LeeJ Thank you sweet. Greeneyes Thanks for the lovely. Becka, You are a charmer. JM, I guess I am an old softie. Martie Thank you sweet. Kit, You are a love. RSWells, Thank you my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice Sy I have two of my own...and I'm sharing this with them |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You are a love. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
... All the love we have for you returned here by the multitude |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Love you too. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This is wonderful.... ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alli, Thank you for making me feel I succeeded. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beauty n excellance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How tender and beautiful. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweet. |
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